originally posted in:Offtopic Den
I hope to be making more of these stories for everyone's enjoyment! I hope y'all like it:)
[spoiler]The Doctors visit
By: That Girl
Fruity pebbles were everywhere. So was the milk. There was blood mixed in with the cereal and milk that was strewn all over the usually clean, bright yellow tile. Bant Panda stood over the crumpled body of Old Gregg with a spoon in hand. Bant checked for a pulse of which he found none. He slumped onto the ground and sat beside the cold, stiff body of Old Gregg, and wondered what had happened.
24 hours earlier.
As a car came to an abrupt stop outside the clinic, Dr. Logical Jack could hear the horrific screams of one of his oldest patients, Old Gregg. He chuckled to himself and thought of how Gregg would react to finding out that today's visit was shot day. He felt badly though for Gregg's caretaker Bant Panda, who had to restrain Gregg during visits so Dr. Jack could take a look at him.
As Bant was restraining Gregg in handcuffs to keep him under control, a handsome young man by the name of South waltzed out of the clinic, worry free. "Howdy" South spoke as he tipped his Stetson towards Bant and Greg, and then without another word, walked off. As Gregg was cursing up a storm about music, Bant walked him to the glass sliding doors of the Offtopic Lounge clinic.
Once they had arrived in the waiting room, Bant checked Hregg in and the two men sat down in the stiff, plain white chairs that were arranged along the right and left sides of the walls. Bant curiously gazed at his surroundings. The white ceiling, the blue walls, and the strange, but edible plants that were arranged in various places around the room. After a few minutes Gregg quieted down, and snatched a five year old magazine and started to furiously read through it while slurping loudly on a Big Ass 320oz Coke from Penguin's Big Ass Restaurant.
Two hours later, Bant and Gregg were called up to the desk and beckoned to go into the doctor's office. Dr. Logical Jack sat back in his leather chair fiddling with his stethoscope, and quickly looked up when Bant and Gregg came into the room. "Why hello Gregg, how are you doing today?" Dr. Jack stood up while while extending a hand towards the two men. His outstretched hand was grasped and shook by Bant's fluffy paw. As Dr. Jack offered for them to sit down, the trio heard a loud bang and crash a few meters away, and they all rushed out of the small office to see what the noise was.
To be continued in The mystery of Old Gregg's murder. [/spoiler]
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You do an excellent job of retelling this. You know what, we should make a role-playing thread on offtopic!
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0/10 not enough xi GoinHam.
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Edited by Calvin: 12/23/2015 1:12:27 AM[i]"fruity pebbles"[/i] Ok that's cool [i]"blood mixed with the cereal"[/i] Nope I'm out of here
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BUMP!