It's 2 minutes long or so, and only my first draft. I had to make a "dream sequence" for Digital Media, but I modeled this more after a nightmare. I'm going to be adding in a lot of stuff like quick flashes of various things that add to the plot, filters, audio distortion, and a lot of other things that will keep it from being as boring as it seems here.
[u]Things that are final (please critique me on these)[/u]
--The individual shots themselves (panning, tracking, zooming, etc.)
--The acting
--The general direction of the plot (moving from place to place)
[u]Things that I'm going to edit later[/u]
--The sound of the dolly moving in the movement shots
--The composition as a whole will have a lot more quick, creepy flashes of things
--The name (perhaps, I don't know if I'm sticking with it)
--The audio in general is going to be overhauled to be smoother, and I might put in a background song with a "radio" effect
P.S. I used shitty in-browser video software to make this, on Monday I'll have access to Final Cut Pro.
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[quote]It's crappy.[/quote]