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This story didn't seem to be getting much feedback so I thought I'd change the layout. an exert can be found onsite to read more easily now. the whole story (including other chapters) can still be found in the google doc's link.
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Edited by The old North: 1/30/2014 1:38:46 PMThe third part has been added now. Its in the same document as the others so people don't have to keep searching for the links. I hope it reads okay, this chapter has quite a lot happen in it and its all rather fast so I'm slightly worried the pacing will seem off. anyway, hope you enjoy it, i'm still enjoying writing it. Comments appreciated as always.