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So here is my Destiny story called "Shachal." This is Chapter 1 titled Reinstated. "Shachal's" "ch" is pronounced with a "k" sound. The pronunciation is "shah-kahl". Just a little bit of info for those who are having trouble pronouncing it.
I don't only use first person or third person, but blend both in this story, because the thoughts and dialogue of the other characters are just as important to the story as the main character's. The perspective of the main character is in first person. My reason for doing that is for the purpose of making the main character connectable/relatable to the reader. Third person is used for all other characters. So expect a change in tones as you read.
I divide important sections of the story with the Destiny logo, where a perspective change occurs or the story jumps to a separate time or place. That much will stay consistent so that confusion can be avoided.
Feel free to comment your thoughts on the chapter and predictions if you want. Positive, honest, respectful feedback is greatly appreciated. Enjoy and thanks for reading.
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Looks like a good read. I'm on mobile, so I'll be sure to give it a read tomorrow and leave some feedback.