originally posted in:The Black Garden
Thank you very much, i'll take a look back on that, but i'm trying to contain her emotions until the end of chapter 2, and most of chapter 3. make her seem solid on the outside and then break her apart.
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that is sick and disturbed and just what a writer would do. I love it.
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thank you. The main challenge is making it flow with a string of flashbacks.