[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] n008c4k [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Wolverfrog ...the actual novel itself is vastly under a publishable standard. Even now I don't think I'm at a level where I would consider pursuing publication of an original text.[/quote] [url=http://reasoningwithvampires.tumblr.com/tagged/capital_letters]Oh[/url] [url=http://reasoningwithvampires.tumblr.com/tagged/comma_abuse]really?[/url] [url=http://reasoningwithvampires.tumblr.com/search/comma]I[/url] [url=http://reasoningwithvampires.tumblr.com/tagged/Punctuation_Abuse]disagree.[/url] If crap like that can get published, I doubt you'll have any issues. For one, you use (almost always) proper grammar. Number two, you give characters this magical thing called [i]depth[/i]. You might have heard of it. It's when your characters aren't just generic cut-outs. And third, you're British. That seems to help for some reason.[/quote] He's right about the depth of the characters, I feel like I know them.