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[spoiler]one of the characters i pitched was one with time manipulation, and i mean time powers like in quantum break. mind time in my books follows the 'you can't change shit' rule. Another one was two identical twins one with a cosmic iron sword and one with a cosmic iron shield. Pants even gave me the greenlight to continue using cosmic iron. They we're going to have a cool working together mechanic which makes them unstoppable while United but a pushover when separated.[/spoiler]