Hello everyone.
Here is the prologue of a new destiny based story created by myself enjoy and please comment your opinions of the story.
Also please share this otherwise i won't continue posting these.
Prologue:
The water slowly trickled down the cracks of the mossy rocks, the sound of venus's various species of birds were singing their songs over the thick dense jungle which the planet is famous for as the sun started its slow decent to the horizon.
It seemed like another day of paradise for what was left of the inhabitants of venus after the collapse.
Then silence.
He ran until he could feel his heart hitting his chest and refused to stop despite all the branches and vegitation slowing him down, he just kept running.
"Ghost call the ship now" he gasped while uncovering his dark blue ghost, it emitted a red pulse.
"Unfortunatly i am unable to call the ship, something is very wrong" it replied in a worried tone.
A thick branch suddenly swung out of no where and hit him square in the chest knocking what little breath he had left out of him and he collapsed.
"Just get me out of here!" He unholstered his hand cannon and pointed it down the route which he had carved into the thick barrier of trees.
The ghost tried calling the ship again but still no handshake signal, it became worried then the ghost recieved a text only message.
"The light may think it has won but oryx was a minor setback."
Ghost refused to share this message with its guardian "he has enough on his plate at this moment than to cope with empty threats" it muttered to itself and text only messages direct to ghosts are unheard of maybe the guardian saw the message as well.
He looked at his motion tracker but there was nothing, he holstered his hand cannon and took this oppotunity to catch his breath, "ghost are we ok?" He whispered as his ghost appeared by his shoulder.
"Honestly i have no....." ghost's voice was replaced by static as he felt a searing pain in his shoulder and he stumbled into a large pile of fallen leaves from the trees then he saw the light and his life flashing before his eyes... it was time.
A large shadow stood over his motionless body and looked at the dark blue ghost in his dark metalic gauntlet "hello there ghost i need your help with something" his fingers grasping the ghost "wait who are you? What are youuuuu...." the ghost spoke in a scared tone as the gauntlet crushed the ghost shell leaving only the ghosts eye remaining on the palm of the strangers hand "thank you little ghost for the gift" he mumbled as he looks at the eye which turned from blue into black.
Stay tuned next week for chapter 1: the new kid.
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Idea and story itself seems pretty good, grammar isn't. Please revise and edit next time.